Poetry
Secrets and Treasures
Secrets revealed, treasures untold of
Lying in the depths of the sea
Now or never to be known
As time passes by
Ocean currents flows by
The sun searches day and night with its radians
for the treasure that was hidden in the night, for it has seen only the hidden treasures in the daytime of the past
The Earth would not give it away that easily
Secrets and treasures holds the history of mankind
Some could be seen but cannot be recognized or will never be
But neither in the heights or the depths is a treasure or secret being guaranteed its safety where humans dwell
But there is a sanctuary that will,
Store your treasures in the Kingdom of the Most High where neither rot nor mould will consume it nor robbers will take it away from you
The true home
Where your treasures are is where your heart will be
Nothing is hidden from him, the Omniscient
The creator of Heavens and Earth
Who knows his mind?
All belong to him
………Secrets and Treasures………
“The secret things are God’s and the secret things belong unto the Lord our God;
But those things which revealed belongs to us and our children forever,
That we may do all the words of this law”
Deuteronomy 29:29
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I suggest that you need to revise it and shorten
your lines. You especially need to work on those that end on the
next line. With poetry,
less is more. When your
lines are long and uneven, it throws the flow off and ruins the poem. The poem is good but there are ways to keep the message the same
while shortening the lines. You've done good on the imagery. It kept
my attention.