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The Lord of the Rings
by Julie Michaelson
04/13/14
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And those who passed by
derided Him, wagging
their heads, and saying
'Aha! You who would
destroy the temple and build
it in three days, save
yourself, and come down
from the cross!' [Mark 15:29-30]
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"Did You like my story
about Saturn*, LORD?"

"It was very clever,
child."

"You're just saying that,
LORD. We both know I'm
a clutz."

"I don't make clutzes,
Mein kin'der."

"Yeah, well. I could'a done without
that movie in church, today."

[NOD.]
"I understand."

"It was horrible, and grim;
especially the part with the
Jews standing there in front
of The Cross, and yelling at Jesus."

"It was necessary,
My child."

"Whatever.
Well.
I just felt like a Benedict Arnold,
is all...Ya know: sitting there."

[NOD.]

"I know that You don't care
about my feelings."

"I care about everything,
Mein kin'der."

"Pooey."

"Child, do you know
to Whom you are speaking?"

"The Lord of Saturn's... RINGS?"

"And more,
child.
Much...
More."
*****************************
So also the chief priests mocked
Him to one another with the scribes,
saying, 'He saved others; he cannot
save himself!' [Mark 15:31]

*The author writes for another
website.

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