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Good T o See and Hear
by Joseph O' Sullivan
11/05/13
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How much sillyness in our world of to-day,just live your life any
old way,if to-morrow don't come should we feel so glum,my own T.V.
set it is not a sage,it just shows images like a living page,
instructive and amusing,a box of tricks,and some very good flicks,
sometimes the TRUTH;comes pouring out,some GOSPELS PARABLES,to
make a person think no doubt,all written down on parchment paper,
how revelent they be about THE SON OF MAN;from who's voice they
all first began,OUR GOOD LORD'S,own words they do not age,HIS
TRUTH SPEAKS OUT;like eternity is about,this world we know will
pass away,OUR GOOD LORD,have said HIS OWN WORDS WILL STAY,and
eternity is his own any way,AMEN we must all truly pray.
Joe.

If you died today, are you absolutely certain that you would go to heaven? You can be! TRUST JESUS NOW

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Robin Ulbredtch 09 Nov 2013
I find this article difficult to read because of the organization and punctuation. I don't know where one rhyme begins and the next one ends. The thoughts all seem to run together in one big mixing bowl. I think the article would be easier to read and more effective if it was written as a poem instead of all the lines running together. Keep on writing and sharing Jesus with others! I hope I'm still around when I'm 78 so I can still be writing for Jesus. May God bless you as you continue to write for Him!




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