I love the song lyrics you wrote. Do you also have music to the words?
I believe you could also use this as a "cheer" or "responsive reading" where the worship leader does the verses and has the congregation yell out the verse as a form of praise. We need to learn to trust Jesus to keep us afloat, especially during these last days.
Keep up the encouragement that helps us keep our eyes fixed on Jesus!
One comment is that I think there are too many choruses. As you read the words, the "flow" of the song is not real clear. It doesn't follow the normal verse/chorus pattern and leaves you wondering what's next or where do I go from here?
Many new praise choruses do the same thing, but it's helpful if the song has an established pattern.