It has never been sweeter
Than on a daily basis be kissed by a greeter
One so fair and lovely as you.
What a gentle reminder is my heart
That I can never find anyone kinder
Fairer or true.
Now I have been known to be brass and crude
Sometimes downright a moral and rude
But you are love’s steady creed
A weary soldier’s balm in Gilead in deed
You offer the best of humanity
Allowing me to be free
Forever grant me favor in your hands delicate care
For battle scared wounded souls
Pray amongst the stars my heart
May always find you there.
This is very well written! i thought i could write, but when i actually see other peoples work, it just makes me feel like i'm no where close to good. Just keep writing and keep up the good work and may god bless you through out your whole life!