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What REALLY tempted Eve?
by Julie Michaelson
06/23/13
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Now
the serpent
was more cunning
than any
beast
of the field.
[Genesis 3:1]
*************************
Time: Right before The Fall.
Place: Where else....in The Garden.
Characters: Satan;
and, Eve.
______________________________
It was in the cool of early evening.
God was walking around though nobody
could see Him, at the moment.

A really gorgeous, beautiful woman was
walking about also. Her name was Eve,
and she was bored. Her help-mate, Adam, was off doing God-knows-what in The Garden. Eve couldn't quite put her
finger on it, but she just knew there was
something.........really....DULL...about Adam.

Eve paused by a particularly luscious-looking
Tree, and pressed one beautifully manicured
nail to her plump, wide, cherry-red lips.
What WAS it? Why did she not....FEEL
anything....for this guy?

Eve looked down: gently nudging a lovely
manicured toe against the green, damp
foliage growing beneath The Tree. She
pondered. What WAS it? The problem
was.....she just didn't have.....any......prior...
KNOWLEGE. What did SHE know.....about
men? And.....wouldn't The Lord....have given
her the best that He could have CREATED?
Eve shook her head, and sighed. A gentle
frown pursed her lovely lips, and her long
flowing red-gold hair delicately caressed
the cool breezes kissing her heart-shaped, dimpled-cheeked face.

Of COURSE, The Lord would have given
her the very BEST! No. Eve sighed.
Maybe, she was just looking at Adam in
the wrong way. Perhaps, she just needed
to talk to him more: find out his interests...
discover who the real Adam, really was.
After all......she and Adam were supposed
to be just MEANT for each other.....like...
SOUL MATES, or something?

No.
Eve frowned once more: stopping to
lean gracefully against a wheeping willow tree that was opposite of......The Tree. There was definitely something really
BORING....about him.

Eve was unaware of the silhouette that
her figure made against the tall, slender
trunk of the wheeping willow. She was
well.........extremely zoftig*.

For a soft moment in Time, all was
quiet and breezy. Up in the trees, little
plump birds chirped and sang. There were
no mosquitos....or noisy lawnmowers. Right
beside Eve was a napping lion: purring
throatily, with its long fuzzy tail swishing
gently hither and fro. The lion was dreaming: its big eyes closed and darting
back and forth frenziedly.

Eve looked down and chuckled softly.
What a cute little lion, he was! What
a perfectly matched MATE, he was, for
the magnificent LIONESS! Why couldn't
The Lord have made something like THAT......for HER?

Eve yawned: pressing smooth,
slender, exquisitely manicured fingers
against the pouting cherry-blossom lips
of her sensuous mouth.

The lion suddenly opened his big yellow
eyes, licked his mighty chops, and yawned
also. He got up and stretched. Then he
lifted his big fuzzy chin, sniffed at the
cool evening air.....and lumbered slowly
away: paying not the slightest bit attention
to the voluptuous Eve, at all.

For a long moment all was still.

And,
then,
a deep voice....
penetrated
manfully,
and throbbingly........
into the stillness.
"Hello...........EVE."

{To be continued.}


**********************
And
he said
unto the
woman,
"Yea, hath
God said,
'Ye shall not
eat of
every tree
of the
garden'?"
[Genesis 3:1]

*Yiddish: Marilyn Monroe,
Elizabeth Taylor, Sofia Loren,
and Lonnie Anderson,
all rolled into one.
(The young actresses today just don't
have it.)

Copyright 2013.

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The thoughts and motives that produce and project writings such as your's could be virtually just about anything. Yet one thing is clear, and that is that whatever else this may be, it is in fact, deception.




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