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How Time Flies
by Trish Thompson
03/28/13
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Hard to believe another week's gone by,
always too fast, how time flies....
and oh, how I LOVE YOU!!!

Prayer and praise first thing I do,
Honoring God is always new.....
Such joy I have that He gave me you!!!

Each moment with you is a treasure,
gather them up, I am rich beyond measure....
and oh, how I LOVE YOU!!!

Wonder that Jesus came to rescue me,
transform my world, set me free.....
get my heart ready to share love with you!!!

Each day God gives, then gives me more,
joy, and love, and a husband I adore....
and oh, my Lucian, how MUCH I LOVE YOU!!!


If you died today, are you absolutely certain that you would go to heaven? You can be! TRUST JESUS NOW

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Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom  28 Mar 2013
This is an awesome piece. I can feel your love leap off the page. I'm sure this will be a special treasure for many many years. The only thing I might suggest is to not use as many ellipses (plus ellipses are only three dots with the exception of being at the end or the sentence then three dots and a period)or exclamation points. Your words do an outstanding job of exclaiming for you so sometimes overusing punctuation can have the opposite effect than what you intended. But overall I felt this was a delightful read and it left me with a warm feeling when I was done. Great job and keep writing!




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