This is an awesome piece. I can feel your love leap off the page. I'm sure this will be a special treasure for many many years. The only thing I might suggest is to not use as many ellipses (plus ellipses are only three dots with the exception of being at the end or the sentence then three dots and a period)or exclamation points. Your words do an outstanding job of exclaiming for you so sometimes overusing punctuation can have the opposite effect than what you intended. But overall I felt this was a delightful read and it left me with a warm feeling when I was done. Great job and keep writing!