This poem is an awesome and powerful allegory. I could picture the "dog" attacking and can so relate to those horrible you are dumb messages. I noticed after some question marks, you also had a period and when using dialog like “what’s the lie” ?, capitalize the W and put the punctuation inside the quotation marks--“What’s the lie?"(It also looks like you have a space between your last letters and question marks.)I think this is the type of poem that gives the reader chills. i can feel the passion and the warning in your words. Awesome writing.