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by Joseph O' Sullivan
02/05/13
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Is this my unexpected day,when i will find,and not lose my way,
how can i lose my way indoors,haven't roamed for years,and years;
should not feel at a loss,there's always hope,no price or cost;
inner space means inner choice,that all important imperative voice;like a light it shows what's right,the unexpected is always
present,and always where it is or,it isan't;each day cannot
announce its presence,or tell me when it is going to stop,time can give us a start or stop,once its seen that's why its new,just
like a dream it gives a theme,and borders on what can be real,
so unexpected that it took,that new direction was where to look,
forever is a lifelike book,the unexpected can give a shock,
or indeed a solid knock,that only GOD CAN OPEN UP.
Joe.

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Alicia Renkema 08 Feb 2013
Only God can open up our days and He certainly does bring the unexpected along the way... Boy Joe, I really enjoyed this. Being a fellow poet, I have to marvel at how you were able to write this without stanza's and still get the reader (in this case me) to read it with the proper inflection, at just the right time? This was a great poem; different and fresh. I don't get out much and so could really relate to the isolationism of the character (you)? -- I know, I usually write about myself when it is not a dedication of some kind or for a special occasion... Just wanted to let you know that I read your poem and liked it very much. I think it is wonderful that you are from Ireland. I am from Arizona. In Christ, Alicia




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