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The following is an email I received from a fellow MLM (multi-level marketer) named Marty Kincaid who lived in New Jersey at the time. I had written him about a long sales letter I had written which disappeared by mistakening hitting a key on my keyboard or some such error. This email is Marty's response. Marty and I corresponded by phone and email often between 1999 and 2001 when I lived in Hollywood, Ca. I think Marty was a Roman Catholic who professed to believe in God. We often did three way phone conversations with fellow marketer Gregory Heard from Sacramento. Marty was always trying something new by way of business ventures but he never seemed to make any money at it. I never did either until the Lord blessed my hauling business starting in 2001 but that wasn't for another year into the future. Meanwhile I wasted many hours with MLM as do so many today.
Friday April 21, 2000
I will call you once I have my email cleaned up. I really have nothing left mentally to even listen to anymore great deals. I sure am strapped financially too. I understand your frustration with web tv. I have also taken hours to write letters only to have them lost in cyberspace. you are right I hit the back button and my hard work evaporated. But you have to hit the back button so that your web tv does not disconnect on you. Most times everything is OK when you do that. Sometimes though you get royally screwed. Like you I don't want to recreate the letter nor do I believe I can recapture the emotion inherent in the original. It sucks. That is why you should really think about the money back computer that lets you do everything. Web tv is nothing. This thing will change your experience. Carlton imagine how you would feel if you did not have to type. You just spoke into a mic and the computer wrote your sales letters for you. Imagine talking to your people across the continent and actually seeing them. Lots of great stuff here Carlton. I don't know why you just don't sign on and market these. You get $1,500 for everyone who buys. How many hours would you work at your junkit job to earn that? If you could get all the work you want you would still need to work about 30 hours to make $1,500. what is harder hauling shit or talking to qualified prospects? I don't know Carlton I think if you were serious you could get free qualified leads. Did you get your UT service yet?
Later Yours in Prosperity Marty Kincaid
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Carlton Pruitt ministers the gospel to the Los Angeles area. Formerly a Hollywood actor (SAG member)and junk removal expert he now spends most of his time studying the scriptures, writing articles, hymns and poems and doing street preaching. See his videos on http://www.youtube.com Type LAStreetPreacher in the search bar. CONTACT at Carlton2061@gmail.
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