Do you ever have problems that crossing your way?
Does your heart filled with uttered dismay?
Is your mind now preoccupied?
With things that brings struggle into your life?
Seek for Christ�s presence, deep down your heart�s confinement,
For you may found his unfailing love.
All your fears will surely fade
Our savior, Lord Christ-Jesus will give you warm embrace.
Is failure causing you so much pain?
Is sufferings drives you in vain?
Striving hard to free your life from past sins,
Longing for a pleasant life you always dream.
Only the Lord Christ-Jesus will give you everything
In Him, you will surely count the Father God�s blessing,
He is the only way, our salvation and strength.
In His hands our lives are in safe.
He will cast away our sorrow and tears,
Remove all sadness sheer, including all the uncertainty.
In His arms we could expect victory.
For our Lord Jesus, is great and mighty.
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This is really beautiful. I can feel your passion in your words. I noticed that some of the lines seemed to have the wrong tense but by switching it just a tad I think you could still have it fit your rhythm pattern. For example you might want to adjust the first two lines to something like this:(just to help the flow)
Do you ever have problems that cross your way?
Is your heart filled with uttered dismay?
I just changed crossing to cross and does to Is.
You have a natural talent and though I'm not musical at all (I can't carry a tune in a bucket) I could almost hear you singing this beautiful message of God's love. Keep writing, for only you can write the words that God lays on your heart!