I absolutely love this. It gave me goosebumps. I can't even begin to tell you how much this touched me on a spiritual level. On a writing level it impressed me as well. It's not easy to find rhymes for words like reverie. :) The repetition was always done just right. This is truly a beautiful piece. I would love to put it in my church newsletter, if you're okay with that. I'll include your name and tell them where they can find more of your work. The newsletter goes out to about 250 families. Again this is lovely.