Home Tour About What's New Help Forums Join Login My Account Shop
Save
Support
E
Book
Store
I
Need A
Savior
301
  

The HOME for Christian writers! The Home for Christian Writers!



 
Poetry PLEASE ENCOURAGE THE AUTHOR BY COMMENTING

  LEAVE COMMENT ON ARTICLE   SEND A PRIVATE MESSAGE
  HIRE THIS WRITER
REPORT ARTICLE

 TRACK THIS AUTHOR ADD TO MY FAVORITES
corner
What's New
 
corner
 
Love Now Stilled
by Tim Rake
09/05/12
For Sale
Author requests article critique


  Mail
 





My body has been plundered,
passion from flesh violently sundered,
the streams of love now never to be spent,
on her for whom they were sacredly meant.
 
My cistern dug out and painfully unearthed,
whence three were once proudly birthed,
Cupid's hearth ripped from the wall,
leaving me a grieving gall.
 
Sapless as a desert tree,
moistless, parched, and arid I be.
 
Though spirits move and nerve should tremble,
I am no longer what I resemble,
but only a shadow of amour and desire,
he who to words must finally retire,
and cherish the memory of conjugal thrill,
in the silence of love now stayed and stilled.

Read more articles by Tim Rake or search for articles on the same topic or others.




Read NEWEST ARTICLES by Christian authors

Read MOST READ ARTICLES by Christian authors


Read our most read and highly acclaimed CHALLENGE CONTEST ARTICLES

JOIN US at FaithWriters for Free. Grow as a Writer and Spread the Gospel.

If you died today, are you absolutely certain that you would go to heaven? You can be! TRUST JESUS NOW

The opinions expressed by authors do not necessarily reflect the opinion of FaithWriters.com.
 
corner
Corner
This article has been read 83 times     < Previous | Next >


Member Comments
Member Date
Joanne Sher  05 Sep 2012
Really like the imagery. Thanks!




TRUST JESUS TODAY

ALL SINS FORGIVEN









Free Audio Bible
500 Plus Languages
Faith Comes By Hearing.com









   
© MeasurelessMedia. All rights reservedTerms of Service