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by Joseph O' Sullivan
08/19/12
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Although am not forgot,like some table or wot,not;
my writing pen you see,can find words that are still free,in a sense they cannot age,can walk on
to any stage,where oration's are still made,some
serious;or for fun,could go on till kingdom's come,
some may just walk in the door,am here for another
day,do'nt forget how to pray,better words you cannot say,if sincere they will be clear,an entreaty is a plea,GOD;grant that i may see,that
the life he gives to me,through his vastness i
shall be,a soul forever free,his own word is a decree,to you and also me,eternity is then where,
GOD;is never absent there,and a thousand days
one day,only this OUR GOD CAN SAY.
Joe.

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Gregory Booker  21 Aug 2012
Good general flow of thoughts and could feel your sincerity. But it took me 3 times to read it within the rhythm of poetry. I would suggest better use of capitalizing first word of each thought. Also not capitalizing " I " felt elementary. I got lost without the use of capitalization to help frame the lines.




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