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Somnium
by Micah Mason
07/05/12
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http://soundcloud.com/sirpure/somnium-feat-crucial-fix (Listen Here)

verse 1(Crucial-Fix):
rewind through your life do you see regret or satisfaction?
when youíre standing at the pearly gates tryin to explain your actions
Do you think that you took His words and gifts straight to your heart,
Or do you think heíll say that your life really kinda fell apart?

Itís all about the choices that we make, and the chances that we take
whether weíre strong or break has to do with our faith
and if weíve strengthened it then one day we know weíll be saved
Father, Son and the Holy Spirit, prayin so loud that Heaven can hear it
The true meaning of hypocrisy, is treating people unequally, saying you are better than me
or using people disrespectfully
for people on earth there should be, no human hierarchy, no countryís royalty
leave that up to our deity, our holy Creator only ruler, and the one that they call G. O. D.

Hook (Sir Pure):
You may hate me
Try to debate me
And think poorly of me
Wantin to persuade me

But I refuse conformity
Cause it isnít about me
Iím after something Heavenly
The essence of morality

2nd Verse (Sir Pure):
You applaud sexy
But support objectivity
Caught in a fantasy
Runnin from reality

Can you just not see
Youíre bein demeaning
Likin whatís addicting
Doesnít show responsibility

We say weíve moved on
Yet continue to see slavery
Tryin to hide our indiscretion
With a nation caught up on money

Many thinkin theyíre a new Webster
Theyíre own personal dictionary
Redefinin words like a jester
Despite knowin theyíre contradictory

One nation under God, the one to pursue
To Christ you should surrender all
Not to the temptations that consume you
Without Him youíre destined to fall
So listen to His call, He can lead you through
Thereís nothin that He canít do

Hook (Sir Pure):
You may hate me
Try to debate me
And think poorly of me
Wantin to persuade me

But I refuse conformity
Cause it isnít about me
Iím after something Heavenly
The essence of morality

verse 3(Crucial-Fix):
Itís the point we missed, when we took Godís gift, and threw it away like a played out script
when I was a kid everything was flipped, whatís going on with relationships?
cause now thingís changed, theyíre rearranged, everything is different nothing is the same
I donít even know how to play their game
I donít even think guys show any shame
Quite despicable, so predictable yet if we hit now itís quite (Cruci)-Fixable
take a look at the holy crucifix, stay away from the 666, stop using people just for kicks
and look for a lasting love that sticks
somethingís wrong now we both agree, what ever happened to chivalry?
it must have been killed in a painful way cause it did not die just peacefully
so what really happened? thatís why weíre trappiní
and comin after all those people whoís braggin
about their number and not about their love
thereís angels on earth, and angels above
donít fling stones at the people so pure that their wings are as white as the new born dove

Hook x2 (Sir Pure):
You may hate me
Try to debate me
And think poorly of me
Wantin to persuade me

But I refuse conformity
Cause it isnít about me
Iím after something Heavenly
The essence of morality

Closing (Crucial-Fix/Sir Pure alternate):
Is it your wants or needs to which you adhere?
Are you driven with purpose or by others wishes?
What feelings come to mind when you look into the mirror?
Will you edify or destroy the rest of your existence?

If you died today, are you absolutely certain that you would go to heaven? You can be! TRUST JESUS NOW

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Bea Edwards  06 Jul 2012
Thanks Micah-interesting rap, the lyrics are spot on and sharp- however not so sure about the rapper rapping....




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