I like your poem, "Walk through the Garden." It has a good message and very good rhyming couplets with some proximate rhymes. Several good examples poetic devices are used like consonance, assonance and alliteration. Good simile in the line,"Your sins will be as dust in the wind." I especially like the lines,"Redemption I'll give you for any reason; my mercy will last throughout every season."
Blessings,
Maria
