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White as Snow
by Alan Thorimbert
05/24/12
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The snow glistens innocently
in crystal perfection
molded uniquely with immaculate grace
The sun shines through the winter paradise
that runs across the landscape
with childish enthusiasm
the wind wraps the flakes in its arms
and throws it to the heavens
from which with angelic agility
it settles again once more in ethereal splendor

But human defection rushes in
and taints the silvery beauty
with sullied soot darkened with dirt
that wreaks havoc to the heart
of the fair realm of ivory
for which cherubs cry for the lost
virtue of the dazzling glory
diminished by mortal immorality
that violates the snows complexion
with unstable slippery shadowy slush

Then a blizzard storm sweeps in with saving cleanliness
that washes everything white
removing the stained flaws
and returning the snow its' rosy complexion
elegantly dusting alabaster powders
upon sapphire furs and forest pines
amongst sun-kissed fields crowned with extravagance
refreshed by springs of cut glass
pearled in glossed radiance
redeemed from the rough


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debra little 28 May 2012
I agree with Gayle, very good keep writting I really enjoyed this!!!!
Gayle McMillan 26 May 2012
White as Snow- I enjoyed the imagery, the choice of words that depicted what you were saying. Your eloquent phrasing. Thank you!
Marina Rojas 26 May 2012
I enjoyed this piece and its vivid imagery. Thank you for sharing!




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