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I'm at the Place
by David Miller
05/09/12
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I知 at the point where life has ceased to be.
Not in death though that now brings intrigue.
Betrayal has crushed my spirit.
Deceit has left a stain upon my soul.

I知 at the place where I知 the friend in need.
But no one runs to assist in my need to breathe.
Loneliness leaves me uninspired.
Emptiness assaults my need to be.

I知 in the place where broken hearts are said to mend.
At once I知 where Judgment and sorrow have no foothold.
Strength has flooded my spirit.
Agape love has healed my soul.


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Marina Rojas 19 May 2012
Wow, this is so full of despair and longing for love. You paint a good picture of such a heartbreaking pain in this piece, I would have loved to see some hope given through God's healing balm.




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