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Fish
by Alan Thorimbert
04/20/12
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A Fish
It squirms uneasily
while it swims beneath the surface
unseen at first, but soon caught
and brought out in the sun
open for all to see
It stinks profusely
repelling those closest to it
yet many have gained
taste and a talent for it
A lie


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Gerri Wright 22 Apr 2012
Well done! Your images are vivid and apt. You reeled me right in. And I loved the punch of surprise you gave us at the end. This is creative, thought-provoking, quality writing. Would you read and review one of my poems, please?




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