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Blue Skies
by Angel Hare
04/19/12
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Cloudy skies blocked my view
Of your amazing grace 
Trying so hard just to shine through. 

I had walked  through this dense dark jungle
So many times before 
Stumbling and tripping over broken branches 
That had cluttered the forest floor. 

I tried to get out, 
Any way that I could 
Except for coming to you. 

I had never imagined that 
You would be the one
To turn my gray skies
Back to blue. 

Rain started to pour, 
Blurring my vision even farther 
Mud began to cake the earth 
Making it even harder 
To get through

I cried with a loud voice 
"What must I do
To get out of this miserable hell 
That I've fallen into?"

Then, in a instant sudden surprise 
The rain stopped pouring
The birds started singing 
And the sun began to rise

I heard your voice 
So sweet and dear
Saying "Come to me my child, 
And everything will be clear." 

So I ran as fast as I could 
And did not stop 
until I reached Your outstretched arms 
Waiting for me
Tenderly drawing me near. 

Now my skies are blue 
Branches no longer clutter my path 
I can see the way in front of me 
As long as you hold my hand. 


If you died today, are you absolutely certain that you would go to heaven? You can be! TRUST JESUS NOW

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William Mae 19 Apr 2012
This was such a good way of describing the path and struggles of a person heart in search of peace. The before and the after. I just love how you described it.




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