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You see the cracks
by Ellen Carr 
04/08/12
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YOU SEE THE CRACKS

I don’t see the cracks
So tiny
Where light will break through

You do Lord
You prise them gently apart
So a ray of light
Thin and gentle
Shines in

Hard, thick skins
Bear hairline maps
Of fractures to come

You could crowbar them open
And push in your light
To dazzle

But you gently waken
The darkened soul
To your soft light

Soft glow
Warm joy
Pushes open the cracks
For a coming floodlight

©Ellen Carr 2010
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Debbie Harris  16 Jul 2012
Beautiful Job. Keep writing. :)
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom  23 May 2012
This is really lovely. You painted a beautiful picture for me.




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