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by caroline ferguson
03/19/12
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When I see all the trees and the flowers.
I can see God's great powers

Every little detail from the butterfly to the bee.
He made them all for you and for me.

To see a new born baby so perfect in every way.
It shows how much He loves us each and every day.

He gave us the sunshine to make our hearts feel glad.
To keep us warm in summer and take away the sad.

The beauty of a snow flake as it falls from the sky.
So many different kinds do we ever wonder how.

The moon and the stars tell a story about God's glory.
And the clouds float by to catch your eye.

It has to be the power of God that made this world so fair.
It has to be the love of God given freely for us to share

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bo Jennings 21 Mar 2012
The poem moves well. It has a sweet message. The only areas that need a little brush up would be the 2 stanzas that don't rhyme. And, this one: The moon and the stars tell a story about God's glory. And the clouds float by to catch your eye. needs a wee bit of timing work, other than that it is a nice poem. Bojenn
bo Jennings 21 Mar 2012
The poem moves well. It has a sweet message. The only areas that need a little brush up would be the 2 stanzas thatwhere the last words don't rhyme. And, this one: The moon and the stars tell a story about God's glory. And the clouds float by to catch your eye. This needs a wee bit of timing work, other than that it is a nice poem. Bojenn




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