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COCAINE
by Jeff Hamilton
11/09/11
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COCAINE
Listen up my friends and listen well.
I値l take you on a trip to hell!
At first I値l take you in real slow,
But the seed I plant will surely grow.
I値l start you out with a couple of lines,
But that will increase over a period of time.
You値l trust in me more every day,
I値l tell you exactly what you want me to say.
Soon I値l have you in my grip,
They値l be no abandoning this deadly ship.
So come on, climb aboard! No time to dwell!
Off we go to the pit of hell!
I値l own your mind; I値l strip your pride,
You値l never get off this hell ride!
I値l make you steal from your brother,
Your sister, your father, and even your mother.
I値l turn your dreams into nightmares,
You値l beg for mercy, but I won稚 care.
I値l rip your heart out of your chest,
That痴 what I do, and I do it best.
I値l take your money, every dime you acquire,
I値l cast your soul into the lake of fire.
What? Feed your kids? They don稚 need to eat,
Besides, they値l soon be in the street.
To your God you will cry out,
But He won稚 answer because of your doubt.
You think you know pain? You haven稚 a clue,
You値l pray to die before I am through.
But no, you won稚 get out that way,
I値l make you suffer more every day.
Your wife has had more than she can stand,
You値l find her in the arms of another man.
Your kids will hate you because of me,
But I値l tighten my grip, you値l never be free.
You値l be the loneliest person on earth,
Pride is gone, no self- worth.
Guilt and shame, that痴 all you値l know,
So take another hit, have another blow.
Institutions and death is what I do,
I致e reserved a spot just for you.
Your mom will cry, you値l break her heart,
Your dad will grieve, it値l tear him apart.
You値l quit me time and time again,
But you値l be back, I always win!
Don稚 blame me, you had a choice,
But you couldn稚 speak, I took your voice!
I値l take it all, they値l be no end,
Then I値l turn on you, I知 not your friend.
Who am I you ask, who caused you this pain?
Hello, my friend, my name is cocaine.


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Sarah Mursell 09 Nov 2011
That's brilliant, witty, quirky and true....great poem.x




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