Though some of the flow of the verse seemed a bit "Off Key", the message content was clear and thought provoking. Mush is expected(At times demanded) by many from A pastor. Peter denied Christ three times. Paul persecuted and put many c/hristians to death. They were forgiven by Christ. you got that essential Christian ground of being across quite well. You deliberate lack of comdemnation was inspirational. I would only recommend a verse/line that expressed some personal connection with the Pastor in his brokeness for he seems left all alone in his time of tribulation. Keep writing! :-) Peace
Very good poem. It is well thought out and is not condemning. I liked the fact that you brought out that not only is a pastor responsible for his actions, but that a congregation is responsible for their reactions. Good job.
[For people put their pastor up too high]
Indeed they do. This piece is a VERY good reminder that people fall down in their walk with the LORD. Even the best among us can have a weak moment in their life. We just have to get back up and on track (God's track that is).
Thanks for posting this.
God Bless. Sincerely, Dan Blankenship