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joie notes
by Susan Michaels
10/24/11
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Night waves Splash cool

Marbled beaches

Black skies coved Echo glories

Unspoken

Spheres sweep Breakers ashore

Silently asleep

Here and there joie dreams

Drift

Ripples riff Dancing rain

la Jeff Beck

Trickles soft On glass

Awaking Sunday's

Uplifting light Sing song




Copyright 2011 S. Michaels
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NOTE: 'joie' is French for 'joy'

Jeff Beck is one of music's 'all-time greatest' guitarists


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Yvonne Blake  26 Oct 2011
I like your imagery (and french words). Personally, I think it would be stronger without the mention of Jeff Black. Let the reader imagine their own music, because this poem does sing!
Susan Michaels 26 Oct 2011
Thanks so much, Yvonne... and yes, well, you may be quite right about Jeff Beck's name, but you know I just saw him in concert when I wrote this, so he just HAD to be there! I'm finding the people on my blog who like this poem are 'Beck' fans :)




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