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kelvin fowler the motivator
by sethabela l JACOB
07/20/11
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why kelvin why?
why do you pay attention to the;
thrash
nonsense
fictions
that i write
what is it that you see that others cannt see
what isit that you see that others cannt pay attention to

because
i now feel encouraged enough to say i can
i now feel strong enough to write as many poems as i can
i now feel dedicated enough to say i will continue

because
one mans comments keep me going
one poets compliments keeps me ahead
one pastors prayers helps me to thrive

why kelvin why ?
even though i dont know you phisycally
spiritually you are a friend in need and indeed you are a pastor
i wish to be on your congregation because you belive in me
bt still i ask
why kelvin why?
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Kelvin Fowler 25 Jul 2011
Why? Because you have an unconventional style and because you can pick interesting subjects to write about. That is why? btw if you were to post in the critique circle, you would probably get some good advice on how to make your poems even better. God bless




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