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HE IS COMING
by Kelvin Fowler 
06/06/11
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in terror I fell on my knee
screaming and pointing to where the stars should be
i watched him gallop his white horse across the skies
wearing his proclamation on his thighs
like glistening hot candle wax at night
his robe was flowing thick and white
then I saw his bottom lip stretched and thin
deformed and pushed out over his chin
a huge chunky wrought iron sword
protruded from his mouth
burnt in it the words truth and mercy revealed himself
his eyes simply radiated light
as a torch in the dead of night
terror screamed through my veins with a start
like an arrow piercing my heart

HE IS COMING



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Wesley Hesketh  03 Sep 2011
What can a newbee, that can't put a dot right, tell a master what to write? Very descriptive I was able to see Him. I can see what you mean when you said to make each word a thought. Thank you for your great example.




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