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by Erin Dijkema
05/09/11
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The tears of the universe drop in multitudes
One universe contains good and evil,
Evil, discouraging the good, but also creating determination
For good to win the struggles for those individuals,
Ignorantly and innocently victim to torture and manipulation.
One universe, a battleground forever.

One man, one life, minute in comparison
But the struggle is all the same, tears hidden inside,
Frustrations shown. Anger at the incomprehensible,
Sadness at the injustice. Ignorance given to what is too much,
Too much to care for, too much to fulfill one’s felt duty to assist.
Enough war, injury and confusion for some to give in in desperation.
Some give in to receive the alluring rewards from surrendering,
Caring for individuality, not the global, universal, historical community
One man, pushed into the pressures of the struggles of this battle,
Some are not even his own vices and injuries, but his heart aches and screams.

One moment, enough to change the future, despite motivation or attitude.
A moment, a moment of decision; extremes placed on a spectrum,
Each final decision resulting in victory and defeat. There it is;
Hidden during the normalities of life, not showing any evidence of its existence
Covering its ugliness, but knowing its power. In one sudden moment, there it is.
The fury, the cruel, the spiteful; displaying its show of pride and selfishness.
Towns and hearts have disappeared as results of these moments, ambushed by the unseen.
Physical entities are endangered by forces present; shadows lurk even in the darkest crevice.
The struggle for humankind defined by pain and shortfalls, its shamed and proud deviants.
One moment, one moment to make all previous decisions move more in the current of life-
Thrown back and forth, disorientated in the scheme of worldly evil and good.

One moment, enough to change the future, despite motivation or attitude.
A moment, a moment of decision; extremes placed on a spectrum,
Each final decision resulting in victory and defeat. There it is;
Hidden during the normalities of life, not showing any evidence of its existence,
Wisely presenting itself at needed moments, giving relief and hope for countless moments
Knowing its silent power, whispers in the wind carry the fact of the deed; whispers carried by the heart.
Giving confidence to provide, to care and to love, with less than an expectation of reciprocation.
Lives renewed, changed, never to return; attitudes reviving the need to bask in the glory of life –
And the possibilities of victorious peace, clear future and stable support for the will of God.



If you died today, are you absolutely certain that you would go to heaven? You can be! TRUST JESUS NOW

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