Hire
Writers
Editors
Home Tour About Read What's New Help Join Faith
Writers
Forum
My Account Login
Shop
Save
Support
Book
Store
Learn
About
Jesus
  

Get Our Daily Devotional             Win A Publishing Package             Detailed Navigation

The HOME for Christian writers! The Home for Christian Writers!



 
Devotionals PLEASE ENCOURAGE THE AUTHOR BY COMMENTING

  LEAVE COMMENT ON ARTICLE   SEND A PRIVATE MESSAGE
  HIRE THIS WRITER
REPORT ARTICLE

 TRACK THIS AUTHOR ADD TO MY FAVORITES
corner
What's New
 
corner
 
untitled
by gillian liversedge
05/01/04
Free to Share
Author requests article critique


  Mail
 





Tired and busy,
I took a moment to wander to the beach.
The sun was setting,
I took off my shoes
Lay them on the sand,
And stood a while to rest.

I saw the sky.
Today so blue, so awesome.
Yet I know,
That where I could not see
Were stars, too many to count
Full of beauty, majesty and light.

I saw the sea.
Today so calm, so still,
It took my breath away.
Yet I know,
That where I cannot see
It was full of life,
Colourful, vibrant, exciting.

I saw my life.
Today so full, so busy.
Yet I know,
That scratch the surface and Iíll see
Eternal life,
Full of Godís purpose and plan,
Full of grace and destiny.

And as I stood reflecting,
I heard Your voice.
It whispered my name.
I felt Your hand, enfolding mine,
I knew Your breath upon my face.
And I knew that You, the Helper, had come.

Rested,
Strengthened,
Comforted,
I picked up my shoes,
Turned,
And together
We went on our way.


If you died today, are you absolutely certain that you would go to heaven? You can be! TRUST JESUS NOW

Read more articles by gillian liversedge or search for articles on the same topic or others.


Read More - Free Reprints, Main Site Articles, Most Read Articles or highly acclaimed Challenge Articles. Read Great New Release Christian Books for FREE in our Free Reads for Reviews Program. Christian writers can JOIN US at FaithWriters for Free. Grow as a Writer and help spread the Gospel.


The opinions expressed by authors do not necessarily reflect the opinion of FaithWriters.com.

Hire a Christian Writer, Christian Writer Wanted, Christian Writer Needed, Christian Content Needed
Find a Christian Editor, Hire a Christian Editor, Christian Editor, Find a Christian Writer
 
corner
Corner
This article has been read 490 times     < Previous | Next >


Member Comments
Member Date
Juanita Pittman-Brown 27 May 2004
I truly enjoyed your piece...Your point and flow were excellent...I am a true lover of poetry and appreciate the beauty of the painting on a page of paper that we as writers use as a canvas...This is the type of piece that I know our God smiles at and is pleased with His creation of us as human beings...Keep writing -- you have a lot to offer...Juanita Pittman-Brown




TRUST JESUS TODAY









Free Audio Bible
500 Plus Languages
Faith Comes By Hearing.com