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Mind And Heart
by Judy Wilson
02/14/11
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When You came into my life
I thought I was doing fine
Had my way of doing things
Now I am drinking New Wine

I was a fair weather kind of friend
Could give well meaning advice
Always there when I wanted to be
With Him, I have to think twice

What are the ways of my heart
That thought I knew how to love
Not so when compared to Him
Our God, with the eyes of a dove

I have failed and will fail again
But I can never walk too far away
Hes always there in mind and heart
Wooing me back to Him everyday !

My life is full of highs and lows
Sometimes, I think way too much
He said no more than I could bear
Being faithful with His loving touch

Judy L Wilson
Feb 14, 2011
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Anita Johnson 27 Feb 2011
A very heart warming verse.How often we fail regardless of our best efforts.I am so glad Jesus never fails! Love you always..Neetie
Verna Mull  21 Feb 2011
Judy, I have loved every poem that you write because I can just feel your heart. You write so well about things that we all struggle with in our Spiritual battle. Satan never wants to give up, so we need to totally "give up" TO CHRIST.
Bessie Flint 16 Feb 2011
Judy ... happens to me all the time! :o) I seem to forever use except in place of accept. lol I love this poem it is so beautiful. Keep up the good work!!
Marijo Phelps 14 Feb 2011
Good reminder on Valentine's Day who is the very best Valentine of all!
Connie Allen 14 Feb 2011
Good job. It is so comforting to know HE is always with us no matter what. God Bless You
Bessie Flint 14 Feb 2011
Judy ~~ This is a beautiful poem!!..Beautiful message!! but there are 4 word choices/changes I would suggest in verse 2 -line 1 Id change *fare to fair Verse 3 -line 2 Id change *new to knew Verse 4 -line 2 & also verse 5 line 2 Id change *to to too Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem!
Judy Wilson 14 Feb 2011
Thanks Bessie,you would think i would know better..haaaa .. I fixed it..
Gary James Smith 14 Feb 2011
Nice poem Judy, showing our new relationship with our HEAVENENLY FATHER in the person of our LORD AND SAVIOUR JESUS CHRIST. His life in us does give us cause to reconsider because we still have our old sinful nature that likes to raise its head every once and awhile. Praise Him, that we can have the victory. Hallelujah, what a Saviour! Have a great day!




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