Judy, I have loved every poem that you write because I can just feel your heart. You write so well about things that we all struggle with in our Spiritual battle. Satan never wants to give up, so we need to totally "give up" TO CHRIST.
This is a beautiful poem!!…..Beautiful message!! but there are 4 word choices/changes I would suggest
in verse 2 -line 1 I’d change *fare… to fair
Verse 3 -line 2 I’d change *new… to knew
Verse 4 -line 2 & also verse 5 line 2 I’d change *to… to too
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem!
Nice poem Judy, showing our new relationship with our HEAVENENLY FATHER in the person of our LORD AND SAVIOUR JESUS CHRIST. His life in us does give us cause to reconsider because we still have our old sinful nature that likes to raise its head every once and awhile. Praise Him, that we can have the victory. Hallelujah, what a Saviour! Have a great day!