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Down a Rabit Hole
by sharon force 
02/02/11
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Down, Down Down, I Fell
Down A Rabbit Hole
Light Would Fade and then Go Away
Only to Return in a Dem Way

Get Out of the Rabbit Hole
Climb, Climb and Climb
Slide Back, Back, Back
Climb Again Back Up
The Hole

Only to See Daylight
Daylight Again
Then Fall, Fall, Fall Again

Climbing Back Up Again
One Step, Two Steps, Three Steps
One Back
Reach Out I'm Caught By
A Strong Hand

I Have Relied on The Wrong things
Held to The Wrong Things, Made the Wrong Choices
Now I Grab the Strong Hand

Jesus Reaches Down
It is His Hand that Slowly with Great Care
Pulls Me out of the Rabbit Hole.

Now I Stand with Him on the Mountain Top



If you died today, are you absolutely certain that you would go to heaven? You can be! TRUST JESUS NOW

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LeRoy Dean 04 Feb 2011
Sharon: very unique; the struggle come across vividly as well as the message to trust Jesus and the ending allows the reader to experience a wonderful sense of victory.




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