Some queries about your punctuation and use of the apostrophe, but love the concept of the poem, the rock of innocence worn down by sin and the original child's response that Jesus seeks to restore in us. Fantastic.
Except we become as little children......Oh, how much like children we are at times. The innocence of the soul that has been washed in the blood of the Lamb is pure as the driven snow.Your words here weave a wondrous message to all.Thank you Judy for writing for Jesus. Neetie