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Death O' Death
by Judy Wilson
10/23/10
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In between the Rock of my life
Deep crevices where sins hide
Fissures breach and overflow
Heart, mind and soul divides

Sinew wanes under the guile
The eye drinks in and retains
The mind recalls every malice
Rebellion, the sins of Cain

Death O death come swiftly
Lay to rest that which is me !
I reek of stench, rotten decay
Die self, to gain more of Thee

The power of I means nothing
Bring back my innocent youth
Place Your cross upon my heart
Restoring Thy power and truth

Judy L Wilson
Oct 20,2010
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Malta O'Gorman 26 Oct 2010
Fits all of us in the struggle of vain vs glory and the human vs spiritual. Great message.
Helen Murray 25 Oct 2010
Some queries about your punctuation and use of the apostrophe, but love the concept of the poem, the rock of innocence worn down by sin and the original child's response that Jesus seeks to restore in us. Fantastic.
Judy Wilson 25 Oct 2010
Thanks Helen, fixed it. I think..
Marijo Phelps 23 Oct 2010
Childlike and not childish is my continual cry! Great piece, Judy!
Anita Johnson 23 Oct 2010
Except we become as little children......Oh, how much like children we are at times. The innocence of the soul that has been washed in the blood of the Lamb is pure as the driven snow.Your words here weave a wondrous message to all.Thank you Judy for writing for Jesus. Neetie




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