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Morning Star Rights
by Judy Wilson
06/25/10
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Can you see through midnight
Feel the darkness settle around
Morning seems to never come
The sense of being earthbound

Loneliness for the break of light
To come through, yet another day
How precious the sight of dawn
Taking solace in the Son rayís

I pray, never again this black void
Alone with self, and full of regret
Son of God, our righteous Saviour
Give me Your Light, Your Sonset

So many smiles , less the heart
A walking, talking empty shell
Hateful, hurtful, centered pain
Countless souls with a story to tell

Fill me with Your love and passion
Iíve been the one in indigo plight
Gone the heartache of being alone
Saved, with Morning Star rights !!!


















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Anita Johnson 17 Aug 2010
I love the way you worded this piece.
Herman Salazar Jr  08 Jul 2010
WOW! amazing to read.....it reaches out to the reader and definitely strikes a chord. great job. God Bless You.
Helen Dowd 04 Jul 2010
This poem is heart-wrenching. You depict the DARKness very well. Most people living in a city don't KNOW what dark is. I do. I once lived out in the country where, on a starless night, the DARK was so black that you could FEEL it. It penetrates to the centre of one's being. This dark that you depicted is like that, only it speaks of spiritual darkness. Even as a Christian, one can often feel that the DARKness of soul will swallow you up. THEN COMES THE MORNING STAR. What a glorious relief! ... Well-written poem...Sorry I haven't been able to get to read too many of your articles lately. My latest article will explain. That, and many other circumstances have kept me from reading and writing....Blessings...Helen
Verna Mull  26 Jun 2010
Judi, this is a tremendous poem! You are getting better and better with your verse! This was a thrilling poem to readl.
Lyn Churchyard 25 Jun 2010
Well done, Judy. Another excellent poem from the heart. I particularly loved the final stanza.
Lynn Wallace 25 Jun 2010
A beautiful poem on the Morning Star. I agree with Lynne; the last stanza is great.




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