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Hidden Heart
by Tori Porteous
06/11/10
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Hidden Heart

Once he was a warrior,
Or he seemed so to his people,
Now he walks,
All alone,
Against all the empty evil,

He knew that he could still be loved,
But by whom for he had no one?
So he just walks in despair now,
And waits to be defeated,

If only someone could hear his cries,
All of his lonesome and despair,
Before the end comes and he dies,

Will he ever be loved again?
Or will he always be ignored,
The future seems so forlorn,

His future is up to you.
Although he may seem fake,
He is real inside of you,
Make new friends and love one another,
Because someone… may be lonely too!



If you like... please comment! Hope that you do like! ~T

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Elizabeth Cain 02 Jul 2010
Your first paragraph drew me right into your article. Very well written, and I especially liked the last point you made in the last stanza. I did notice that you used "new" instead of "knew", but aside from that I thought your article was great!




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