Hi Gerald. Thank you very much for your encouraging words. That means so much coming from someone who’s done puppets for so long. I never write skits for puppets, this was just “inspiration” or something like that while I was in the shower. (The water must do something to my brain)
I agree with Patsy on this. You’re only as old as you feel and you don’t talk like an old person. The message makes me sad but I guess it’s a good reminder to spend your time wisely, enjoy every day you have, and remember that there’s plenty to do when you’re older. Interesting ryhyme pattern here (ABAA). Do you think it would sound better as ABAB or ABCB? Just a thought. I’ll have to read more or you work later. God bless!