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by Julie Michaelson
04/07/10
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(The Throne Room,
at present,
is very peaceful
and quiet;
only the pleasant sound
of cold fresh water
bubbling over small rocks,
can be heard.
Most of the angels are off on
Assignment, or busy with
newcomers. The ones in
the Throne Room, standing
guard, are like the best
waiters in a very expensive
restaurant: busy serving,
but consciously making
themselves melt beautifully,
into the Background.)
_________________________
[READING SOMETHING,
WITH INTENSE
INTEREST.]
[SQUINT WITH CURIOSITY,
RATHER THAN BAD VISION.]
[PATIENT FROWN.]
[SHAKING HEAD.]
"Why does she have
Me....NOD,
so MUCH?"

[GENTLE VOICE.]
"Because,
Father......"
[GENTLE SHRUG.]

[GLANCE TO HIS RIGHT.]
[EXASPERATION IN
HIS VOICE.]
"HOW OFTEN,
do I NOD?"

[SHRUG GENTLY,
AGAIN.]
"Only once in a great
while, Father...
but...."

[POINT TO THE
SCROLL, HE IS READING.]
"And,
WHY do I have THIS
PARADE of ANGELS...
constantly COMING
and GOING?"
[CHUCKLE!]
"What IS This:
a BUSTOP?"

[SHRUG GENTLY,
ONCE MORE.]
"It's only her
imagination,
Father....."

[LAUGH!]
"Yes!"
[POINT TO SCROLL,
AGAIN, SHAKING
HIS HEAD.]
"And, do You
NOTICE...how many
of My angels....
are HANDSOME,
and MUSCULAR?"

[GENTLE LAUGH.]

"RIDICULOUS!
And, HOW many
TIMES....must
I CHUCKLE?"

[GENTLE VOICE.]
"It is helping
her to learn
The Word,
Father."

[SHAKING HEAD,
MURMURING.]
[PICK UP ANOTHER
SCROLL, FROM A
DIFFERENT
FAITHWRITERS'.]
[NODDING.]
"Now..THIS..
This...
is very GOOD:
this POEM...."
[NOD.]
"Very good....
very NICE."

[GENTLE NOD.]
[READING THE
POEM, ALSO.]
"Yes.....
very beautiful..."
[POINT TO ANOTHER
FAITHWRITERS-SCROLL,
SUBMITTED FROM
A YET DIFFERENT
WRITER:
RESTING ON THE
TABLE BY THE FATHER'S
THRONE.]
"And, THAT one ...
that ARTICLE,
about the responsiblity
of the CHRISTIAN...."
[GENTLE NOD.]
"Very nice...."

[FROWN.]
[SHAKING HEAD.]
[PICK UP THE
OTHER SCROLL.]
"THIS! I can't
BELIEVE...!
...She
wrote about the
DISCIPLES...
watching TELEVISION!"
[THRUST SCROLL
OVER TO THE THRONE
TO HIS RIGHT.]
"Did You READ THIS?"

[GENTLE BURST
OF LAUGHTER.]

[PATIENT FROWN.]
"And, PARTICULARLY...
such a RIDICULOUS
TELEVISION show!
WHY would
I EVER want My DISCIPLES...
to SEE...
such a THING?"

[GENTLE CHUCKLING,
AND NODDING.]

[GRUFFLY, ROLL OUT ANOTHER
FAITHWRITER'S SCROLL.]
"WHAT about THIS
one?"
[POINT, AND GLANCE
OVER TO HIS RIGHT.]
....Where she has
You showing....
how to TEXT..?
...On a CELL PHONE?
..To Saint PETER?
Is she MESHU'GUN'AH*?"

[ANOTHER GENTLE CHUCKLE.]

[STARING, INCREDULOUSLY,
AT ANOTHER SCROLL.]
"And, WHY does
she keep TELLING ME...
that ENGLISH,
isn't My first LANGUAGE?
Doesn't she know,
that I CREATED all
LANGUAGE?"

[GENTLE SMILE.]
"She is only trying
to be FUNNY,
Father....."

"Oy vey 'z mir!"

[GENTLE LAUGHTER.]

[GRUFFLY MURMURING.]
[SHAKING HEAD.]
[READING ANOTHER
SCROLL.]
"ONE more CHUCKLE...!"

[GENTLE CHUCKLE.]

[GRUFFLY TOSS
SCROLLS DOWN
ON THE SIDE TABLE.]
[LOOK UP.]
[GRUFF VOICE.]
"YES?
WHAT IS IT?"

(One of the Guard Angels
is standing at attention,
just inside the Throne
Room Door.)
"My Lord."
(Bow to one knee.)
"One of the angels,
My Lord.....he...
is back from Assignment.
He asks permission to
speak with You."
(Bow haloed head,
deeply, waiting
for His Answer.)

[PATIENT SIGH.]
"Well.....SEND him,
IN!"
[GRUFFLY BECKON,
WITH HAND.]

"Yes, My Lord."
(Guard Angel stands
up from his kneeling
position, and bows
his head once more;
then, he leaves.)

(Another angel comes
through the Throne Room
Door. He is tall, and
muscular, and
very handsome. His
hair is very long,
and beautiful:
tied back with
a rough piece of
ancient animal hide.
He has the wing span
of several hundred feet.
His bare shoulders
are wide, and strong,
and magnificent.
And..he's carrying...
a really big sword.)

[GENTLE CHUCKLE.]
*********************
Then
He spread it
before me;
and
there was
writing on
the inside...
and written
on it
were lamentations
and mourning
and
woe.
[Ezekiel 2:10]

_____________________
*Yiddish: 'crazy',
'missing a marble';
'looney-tunes'.

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