Hire
Writers
Editors
Home Read What's New Join
Faith
Writers
Forum
My Account Login
Shop
Save
Support
Book
Store
Learn
About
Jesus
  

Read Our Devotional             2016 Opportunities to be Published             Detailed Navigation

The HOME for Christian writers! The Home for Christian Writers!




 
Poetry PLEASE ENCOURAGE
AUTHOR BY COMMENTING


  LEAVE COMMENT ON ARTICLE   SEND A PRIVATE MESSAGE
  HIRE THIS WRITER
REPORT ARTICLE

 TRACK THIS AUTHOR ADD TO MY FAVORITES
corner
What's New
 
corner
 
Feedback
by jorge ochoa
03/02/10
For Sale
Author requests article critique


  Mail
 





This is half poem,
half statement.

I want feedback.

It seems many read what I write,
and many hear what I say.

Yet no feedback.

Perhaps none of its any good,
or I'm not articulating it well enough.

Is that why no feedback?

I know all I need is God,
and his approval of my thoughts and emotions.

Yet I still seek feedback.

In person I can see reactions
in faces without words.

On here I want feedback.

I want to change the world
with these words of mine.

And see the feedback.

Like it
or not.

Feedback.


I don't think God needs the same, just love reciprocated. It's enough for Him to know He did well, and no more. The rest is for our enjoyment.





PLEASE ENCOURAGE AUTHOR BY COMMENTING
LEAVE COMMENT ON ARTICLE
Read more articles by jorge ochoa or search for other articles by topic below.




Read more by clicking on a link:
Free Reprints
Main Site Articles
Most Read Articles
Highly Acclaimed Challenge Articles.
New Release Christian Books for Free for a Simple Review.

NEW - Surprise Me With an Article - Click here for a random URL


God is Not Against You - He Came on an All Out Rescue Mission to Save You


...in Christ God was reconciling the world to himself, not counting their trespasses against them... 2 Cor 5:19

Therefore, my friends, I want you to know that through Jesus the forgiveness of sins is proclaimed to you. Acts 13:38

LEARN & TRUST JESUS HERE

The opinions expressed by authors do not necessarily reflect the opinion of FaithWriters.com.
 
corner
Corner
This article has been read 395 times     < Previous | Next >


Member Comments
Member Date
jorge ochoa 03 Mar 2010
I love it!
Glenn Pettit 02 Mar 2010
My goodness! I have posted dozens of articles--in fact, I post every day--but I receive precious little feedback. I dare say my article-to-comment ratio is far less than yours right now. However, the only feedback I ever hope to get is when I meet Jesus face-to-face and He says to me, "Well done, good and faithful servant." That's all the feedback I will ever need.




TRUST JESUS TODAY











Free Audio Bible
500 Plus Languages
Faith Comes By Hearing.com