This is half poem,
I want feedback.
It seems many read what I write,
and many hear what I say.
Yet no feedback.
Perhaps none of its any good,
or I'm not articulating it well enough.
Is that why no feedback?
I know all I need is God,
and his approval of my thoughts and emotions.
Yet I still seek feedback.
In person I can see reactions
in faces without words.
On here I want feedback.
I want to change the world
with these words of mine.
And see the feedback.
I don't think God needs the same, just love reciprocated. It's enough for Him to know He did well, and no more. The rest is for our enjoyment.
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