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by jorge ochoa
03/02/10
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This is half poem,
half statement.

I want feedback.

It seems many read what I write,
and many hear what I say.

Yet no feedback.

Perhaps none of its any good,
or I'm not articulating it well enough.

Is that why no feedback?

I know all I need is God,
and his approval of my thoughts and emotions.

Yet I still seek feedback.

In person I can see reactions
in faces without words.

On here I want feedback.

I want to change the world
with these words of mine.

And see the feedback.

Like it
or not.

Feedback.


I don't think God needs the same, just love reciprocated. It's enough for Him to know He did well, and no more. The rest is for our enjoyment.





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jorge ochoa 03 Mar 2010
I love it!
Glenn Pettit 02 Mar 2010
My goodness! I have posted dozens of articles--in fact, I post every day--but I receive precious little feedback. I dare say my article-to-comment ratio is far less than yours right now. However, the only feedback I ever hope to get is when I meet Jesus face-to-face and He says to me, "Well done, good and faithful servant." That's all the feedback I will ever need.




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