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On The Play Ground Of Sin
by Jean Lopez
12/10/09
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On the play ground of sin
immorality was having a ball
everybody was sleeping with somebody
and if you were not sleeping with anybody
then you were "nobody" at all.
STD's were for free
alas sickness and death was all around
but no one wanted to leave
the devil's playing ground.
There was no law and order
gang violence was rampaging
killing and shooting
robbing and swearing
amidst all the bling
was the fashion on display.

Along came some politicians
all dressed to the nines
and promised drastic change
with Bills they had drafted
which the people had to pay
But the well-to-do who knew better
they all hid their funds
and sent their fortunes offshore to stay
into someone else's account.
Thus the politicians declared bankruptcy
and left the economy all upto the gays
while they went on vacation
to some exotic place.

Now the fabulous gays were very stylish
and spoke with such aplomb!
if you want to get a job they said
then one of us you would have to become!
hell no said the unemployed
we are straight working class
we will never go that way
we would never go astray!
So straightaway they drank and they frolicked
while smoking crack and getting high
Then suddenly someone declared
that this would be their $tay
and so they all agreed
that being drunk and $elling drugs
was better than being gay.
Thus the party continued
and satan turned-up the sound
and more people came rushing-in
onto the devil's playing ground.

But immorality wasn't finished yet
it didn't even start
because the cartoons had to be updated
and given a new plot
and since no one was exempted
it had to go to church.

Thus immorality gave Fantasia the duck
fifteen little quacks
which sent all the drakes she laid with
flying away
never to come back.
Bobby the skunk was the sheriff
he stole the communion wine
and drank it
and so he was intoxicated
and cursing all the time.
He then staggered and lifted his tail
while shooting-up the place
as he made his way to the club
to watch pretty Fantasia
gyrating on the stage.
Alas
the children were gleefully indoctrinated
with the same subliminal messages
overflowing on the play ground.

Dressed-up as a minister
immorality went to church
and in the name of religion
it gave the pastor its peace
then preached a "new-day bible" sermon
and tried to scatter the grazing sheep
But the Father up in heaven
heard their feeble cry
and sent them a Saviour
whose name is Jesus Christ
And the sheep followed Him
for they knew their Masters voice
and so did the quacks in the pond
for they were also of His fold
but immorality which was bound unto sin
went back to the ball
and kept the party going
while it drafted a new role call.







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Joanne Sher  11 Dec 2009
Some very strong images here. Sounds way too familiar, unfortunately.




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