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princess snow white
by oudawn praseutsinh
10/23/09
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This where I begin, heneasi and gin
On the bed I lie, how did she die,
light it up, sparks blazed up the fiya
turn on the light Iím dieing in the night
how did I let her die, that night
was right in front of the ride
gone so fast she didnít have time to cry

so young still sipping on glue, first book bag still new,
just started to learn about life,her first year in school
i cant take this anymore
let me take a pill,see this is half the reason i'm now ill
let my ink spill,mom told us not go out, the wind was at a chill
incoming car,she was blinded by the lights
rolling wheels like jars rolling down hills
she was hit with on her right
glance at her face, that's when i realized we didnt look alike
glinched my my fist,wipe all the tears away
seen everything at the age of eight
but she was to gone,to gone,sirens to late
but her sparkles still shine it's glow still so array
as she lay she slept in the snow,like princess Snow White
1987 when he took her away, how did I let her go that day

bring out my grief, 22 years with no relief
so many years,so many tears
so many beers,know that love you
my little sister my dear
for those whoíve never lost a love before
it feels like heart full of soars
canít take this no more
just lost everything, feels like you poor
not many hi's,so many goodbyes
cant close my lids,cant open my eyes
but you're the one i think about
feeling like im decaying inside
how did it happen, heneasi and gin
On the bed I lie, how did she die,
light it up, sparks blazed up the fiya
turn on the light Iím dieing in the night
how did I let her die, that one winter night

couldnít run to her on time, foot so little
to much tears all can do is cry them
just boy but I choose to hide them
2 beautiful sisters she was the middle
Turn of the lights, let just mourn a little
Failed so many times,
Beats, but cant find the words to rhyme, them
What if I can relive that day, what would I say
Please stay, run that way, no not this way!
Run back straight, calm yourself donít sway
If I can relive that day, but I pray every night
how did it end, heneasi and gin
On the bed I lie, how did she die,
light it up, sparks blazed up the fiya
not talking about smoking on weed
moma hitting her own seed
by her own hands she took her daughter
and know she was the cause
thats her eyes bleeding fears so many years ago
but i am so clueless...
turn on the light Iím dieing in the night
how did I let her die, that one cold night....

Dimmed out the lights,blessed with insight
I dreamt of you with power of might,so I was like
An angel you were like,sword on you right
Wings that gave you flight,so carry me off
To a place where I can flow,roses were our favorite
So let a field of it grow,with petals you let pour down slow
Heaven is where I want to go,take me home tonight
You do everynight,lights dimmed out I say good night


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