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THINKING OF YOU
by oudawn praseutsinh
10/22/09
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YOU WERE ONLY SIX TO INNOCINT TO BE TAKEN SO SOON.
YOU LAUGHTER MADE ME SMILE BUT NOW MY LIFE IS SO GLOOM.
YOU GONE NOW BUT NOT FORGOTTEN IN MY MENTAL YOU’LL STILL STAY .
I REMEMBER YOU AS BEING BEAUTIFUL AND SMART SO YOU ALWAYS HAVE SOMETHING INTELLIGENT TO SAY.
YOU WERE ALWAYS RIGHT, I WAS ALWAYS WRONG.
I ALWAYS RESPECTED WHAT YOU HAD TO SAY BECAUSE YOUR OPIONIONS WERE STRONG.
WITH MY INSIGHT I TRULY SEE,WITH MY TORN APART HEART.
I BELIEVE ONE DAY WE’LL REUNITE AND NEVER AGAIN BE APART.
WHEN YOU GET MAD AT ME, YOU MADE LAUGHE,WHEN YOU ASK IF I LOVE YOU ,YOU MADE ME CRY
MOMENTS FOR A MOMENT,GOODBYES FOR A GOODBYE
YOUR SPARKIES IN THE SKY I CAN SEE.
SO I LOOK UP AND KNOW YOU’LL ALWAYS BE WITH ME
IN HEAVEN IS WHERE I WANT TO BE.
THAT’S WHY I PLAY THIS ROLE OF GODS SECRET AGENT, GODS YOUNG GEE.
I FIGHT HIM AND I FIGHT YOU MYOU’LL NEVER STOP, I ALWAYS WILL.
THIS IMAGE OF ME AND MY MISSION IS A GREAT BIG CONTRACT DEAL.
BUT I KNOW YOUR SUFFERING IS OVER YOU GO ON HOME
STANDING BESIDE JESUS AS HE SIT ON HIS THRONE.
IM HARD AT WORK AT TRYING TO MAKE IT UP THERE, IT’S A TOUGH ACT TO FOLLOW.
TO BE THERE IS MY GOAL, I KNOW YOU HAVE GREAT CONVERSATIONS WITH OUR FATHER.
BECAUSE YOU BLESSED WITH THE SOUND OF LAUGHTER AND THE VOICE THAT ALL EARS WANT TO HEAR.
AS LONG AS YOU’RE WITH HIM I HAVE NO FEAR.
I BET YOU STILL GOT THAT SMELL OF BABY MILK.
SO I PRAY ONE DAY THAT I CAN HUG YOU,JUST TO GET THE SCENT OF THAT NATURAL SILT.

BUT IT’S A FAR AND UNKNOWN PLACE I’VE NEVER BEEN TO.
YOU ALWAYS COMFORTED ME WHEN I AM SAD,THAT WHY I WANT TO BE THERE WITH YOU.
YOU ARE IN MY MIND AND HEART EVERYDAY.
MAKING A WISH NOW, AND THATS TO HOPE THAT IN MY HEART YOU’LL STAY
UNTILL THE DAY I CAN SEE YOUR EYES WITH MY OWN I HAVE A LOT I WANT TO SAY.
BUT RIGHT ILL JUST PRAY FOR WHAT I DID WRONG TODAY

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