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Hawaii Five O
by Julie Michaelson
10/12/09
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I
and
My Father
are
One.
[John 10:30]
*********************
(Reading the news.)
(Angrily shaking scruffy
head.)
(Fold arms;
fuming.)
"I'm SORRY!
There was,
only ONE!"

[PATIENT SMILE.]
"Who,
My child?"

(Irritable shout.)
"JACK LORD!
There was only
ONE!"

[GENTLY CHUCKLING.]

(Irritable shout.)
"I can't BELIEVE,
THEY'RE GONNA
TRY 'TA HAVE
ANOTHER
HAWAII-5-O!
THERE WAS ONLY
ONE!
THAT'S IT!"

[PATIENTLY NODDING.]
[GENTLE LAUGHTER.]

(Sassy look up at ceiling.)
"THAT's funny!
His name was Jack LORD;
Lord!
GET IT?"

[LAUGHING.]
"Yes,
My beloved.
I
got it."

(Woeful-squint at the
ceiling.)
"That's just IT,
Lord! There was...
only ONE!
YOU!
And....then.."
(Frustrated grimmace.)
This....
JESUS,
came ALONG!"

[GENTLY LAUGHING.]
[NODDING.]
"Yes,
My beloved.
He sure
did."
********************
The Father
is in
Me,
and
I
in Him.
[John 10:38]

_________________________
"Book'im,
Danno."
(Detective Steve McGarrett;
1968)

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Jeanne E Webster  12 Oct 2009
LOL! My smile for the day! Thanks.




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