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home wrecking smile draft 2
by oudawn praseutsinh
10/04/09
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lies that decieves
deception that lures us away
perfect 20/20 vision yet we cannot see what lies behind a face
a smile is a gesture of welcoming
beneath it is sign of a man going through the first stage of loosing his oath
what does a smile mean may i ask?
man already traveling the wrong road
away... away...away from his kids and the the mother that gave them birth
hands in his pocket... he hides his ring
a smile back to give a gestures of deception and cunningness
some may not see at first
but a smile to me should only be given to soemone who truly deserves it
open invitations to a creep with someone you just met off the streetss
crooked path leading to a split road
will you choose to go straight or turn left or right
straight to go back to your family left to go with the lady or right, well...?pick one
i can imagine where that road leads people
to a place where we can not come back from
common sense tells you to go straight
the hearts unstabness to appreciate all the things he have decieves him that he can get more
and the other fork on the road,tells him he can get back on track if he comes back to the same split road
he is in doubt of succeeding with hes attemp to have more then he all ready have
cufusion leads him a away he stops takes threee steps back and turns only to find another fork road
he lust has gottten him to a place he does not reconize,in the heart in has commit adultry...he is lost
the ring on hes finger use to be there he's in shock
closed hes eyes for a sec to calm himself down
and opens to find hes in court for child coustity
he will loose everything today
his marriage,wife ,kids,and all the thing he work heard to earn,everything....
lies that decieves
deception that lures us away
perfect 20/20 vision yet we cannot see what lies behind a face
a smile.....

now hes on ledge with his hands holding his head
thinking to himself he says "i can have all the money
all the fansy things... all i need are my kids,my wife and life back"
now hes on his alone remincning about her just being together,just lieing in bed...
"all i need is a one chance to go back to that road
and this time i will choose the straight path
not the path where my soul he sold
if i can only have everything i had
her love and the smiles from my kids"
a smile...that have nothing but a ending thast sad...
"and i swear, swear ill love them for ever and ever and never break there hearts again
if i only i hadnt fell for that girl with the smile and the crooked road?

the lesson is you dont need all the fancy things. the smiles that comes across you path
are there to test you.you dont need anything but your wife and to see your kids grow, going to school and getting married hoping they wont make the same mistake to a strangers smile....

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Joanne Sher  04 Oct 2009
What a powerful reminder with great images. A lot of people need to hear this message. Thanks for sharing.




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