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GOoD Morning
by Lliam Tallon
09/27/09
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The birds start their mornings
with songs of praise.
Yet some start their mornings
in some kind of haze.

HOLY HOLY HOLY is GOD’S HOLY name
HOLY HOLY HOLY is JESUS we should proclaim.

“Well I can’t think straight
till I get some coffee in me”
But our waking breathes
Should be praising GOD with glee!!!

Yes lots of mornings are quite hazy…
But if you don’t praise GOD…
Your just down right lazy…

Here is a parable… a little tail
5am starts our Christmas sale…

Up to 60% ~ 80% off our entire stock…
5am? I better set my clock!!!

Maybe I’ll get up earlier
and be the first in line
I can’t miss out on that
or be left behind…

“Sorry can you please repeat yourself”
“Let me check again for your name.”
“No its not in here… isn’t that a shame.”

Sorry you’ll have to go over there…
to that other line.
You see the real long one
with downward decline…

Lliam Tallon Copyright © 2009


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Lliam Tallon 24 Oct 2009
As I Write GOoD there is no mistake...The captial letters a word does make...I know it looks wrong a little odd, but my captial letters spell out GOD...
samuel saalwaechter  15 Oct 2009
You can edit your poems by clicking on the manage next to the submit option. "tail" should be "tale" and in the title You want "GOOD MORNING" The thought behind this poem is pretty good. There are many times we'll get up early to do something for ourselves with no thought of God.I tittled my poem "Good Lord ...it's morning" God Bless You as you write.




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