Nicole, Thank you for your kind comment on my "grief article" Just had to look you up and read one of yours and I think I'll get back and read more one of these days. This one was a real grabbe with the name that you used. Good job. Verna Mull
Hooray for a comment! I was hoping someone would leave a critique for my song (Revitalizer). Thank you, Nicole. Now that I look at it again maybe it is somewhat too wordy. I'll have to think about how I want to change it.
Ha ha! This is pretty funny. It sounds like it would be a very catchy song, especially with the right music. Maybe you could make it a little longer? It reminds me of the song by David Crowder Band "Undignified" which is a lot of fun. Let's show our love for Christ and not care what people think. Great work.
