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Totally crazy
by Nicole Van Der Merwe 
09/09/09
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Im totally crazy, totally mad
Totally sold out for You my Jesus
A smile on my face like a Cheshire cat
Smug as a bug on a rug

Chorus:

Jesus I never thought I could
Jesus I never thought I would
Be falling, falling
Head over heals in love with you


You are so delectable
You are so completely rad
Jesus you just blow my mind
Far beyond my wildest dreams
Thats.. Why Im.

Totally crazy, totally mad. (Repeat)





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Verna Mull 28 Oct 2009
Nicole, Thank you for your kind comment on my "grief article" Just had to look you up and read one of yours and I think I'll get back and read more one of these days. This one was a real grabbe with the name that you used. Good job. Verna Mull
Jacob Gibson 02 Oct 2009
Hooray for a comment! I was hoping someone would leave a critique for my song (Revitalizer). Thank you, Nicole. Now that I look at it again maybe it is somewhat too wordy. I'll have to think about how I want to change it. Ha ha! This is pretty funny. It sounds like it would be a very catchy song, especially with the right music. Maybe you could make it a little longer? It reminds me of the song by David Crowder Band "Undignified" which is a lot of fun. Let's show our love for Christ and not care what people think. Great work.




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