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to live and die in a day
by oudawn praseutsinh
07/28/09
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it all happenes in a day...
love,breakup, makeups,and death it all happens in a day
will i live to be twenty eight and day later?
i doubt it, for everything happanes in a day
many lessons has been learned in this short life of mine
appriciations of all the victories in my life time
but I've learned how to give even when i was broke
though i know they use it it to buy crack or dope
turning down a sad face in need
i cannot...
but in these last few seconds
two face i remebered the most
the face that i learn to love
and the face i have to let go
so a sing this sad love song
she entered my life with a stop in time
so i may live for just a second longer
but when she left she took ten seconds with her
And though we tried to make it last
We both knew it wouldn't be long.
for i will not live to be twenty eight and day later?
I lie at night 11:59 and think about
1 minute till i die,i'm the one to blame
just two flowers in a withering in a vase
i cant bare the pain of my life ticing away
two flowers with no grounds
i guess it was destiny that your love fell apart with from this fellow
but for these last seconds i try to hold on to your last love letter
no tears to give this flower lfe all cried out,
this last cry,drip of being used.
though I'm guilty,
I was tired of being accused.
And so I spent my last seconds of my life
heart in pieces, a flower with no petals
but the last sudden seconds
Something happened; I expected it least.
God came to me and poured water on my face
giving me the life i need to live as a new born
this flower with no petals he will raise
so at the end that i may live a day later
love,breakup, makeups,and death it all happens in a day
but today before i die again
i want to tell you i love you!

it all happenes in a day...
love,breakup, makeups,and death it all happens in a day
will i live to be twenty eight and day later?
i doubt it, for everything happanes in a day
many lessons has been learned in this short life of mine
appriciations of all the victories in my life time
but I've learned how to give even when i was broke
though i know they use it it to buy crack or dope
turning down a sad face in need
i cannot...
but in these last few seconds
two face i remebered the most
the face that i learn to love
and the face i have to let go
so a sing this sad love song
she entered my life with a stop in time
so i may live for just a second longer
but when she left she took ten seconds with her
And though we tried to make it last
We both knew it wouldn't be long.
for i will not live to be twenty eight and day later?
I lie at night 11:59 and think about
1 minute till i die,i'm the one to blame
just two flowers in a withering in a vase
i cant bare the pain of my life ticing away
two flowers with no grounds
i guess it was destiny that your love fell apart with from this fellow
but for these last seconds i try to hold on to your last love letter
no tears to give this flower lfe all cried out,
this last cry,drip of being used.
though I'm guilty,
I was tired of being accused.
And so I spent my last seconds of my life
heart in pieces, a flower with no petals
but the last sudden seconds
Something happened; I expected it least.
God came to me and poured water on my face
giving me the life i need to live as a new born
this flower with no petals he will raise
so at the end that i may live a day later
love,breakup, makeups,and death it all happens in a day
but today before i die again
i want to tell you i love you!

to me time doesnt exist but if it were to exist it would coexist only in our mind.we all fall,rise and bleed in a day.it just depends on how hard of a day you have so feell me on this one.and soemone ask how can you believe a sinner?my answer to that is arent you one too.bless be with today for we all live for a day,may the lord pour his spiritual water apon you face so that we keep living to the next day,sorry to be so philosophical,because when we bleed thats when it's in time of need of jesus,youll see lol

If you died today, are you absolutely certain that you would go to heaven? You can be! TRUST JESUS NOW

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Jennifer Alexander 28 Jul 2009
The arms of flesh will fail, but God will never fail us. Beautiful testimony!




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