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lonely heart starving soul part 2
by oudawn praseutsinh
07/26/09
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Bare with me i dont have grammer check or spell check,lol
Excuse but do you guys believe that we came from God?
How we were create and how we came to be
It a simple question to some and to others, itís a figment of our desires
Some people believe it a system man create to control the populous by conspiracy
I say desire because it not just a thing we want to believe in but something we dream to fulfill our needs
So here are my thoughts on this subject everyone please read

Is it God that has design us, to created ,to craft, then to bake
From the dust that once was a very long time ago
Why did he make Eve for Adam and not for Steve, why? Well Steve was guy that was not yet design I believe
He created man to live in his image and immortal we were, until we were lured, and lied we were decieved
To proof that he is real would be a business no one would ever want to go in and deal
That would be a hard subject for someone to profit from the ,it wont be a big steal
ďShow me proof you say now, of this God who speaks to youĒ they say
I cannot see him though I wish I can but try going 1 week with out a meal and heíll show the way
Be on the streets at the age of 16,no where to go, no were to sleep, pray then hell give you a place to stay
Being broke is like a joke people would mock you for, so pray to god you got to hustle to live and youíll get paid
I know it crime to dill but so it prescribing meds and making patience overdose because you sign the contract dill
I was fine until Satan deceived me and sad, íplease take the pillí, and thatís not just another way of looking at life it for rill
Enough talk about me now, let go back to the subject
Imagine the air the fills your lungs, well that his spirit and without breathing it feels like you being hunged
Smell the perfume scent of the flowers? Well thatís made for you and a love one to go picnicking and laugh after you just got hit, and laugh then fakes cries after a bee had stung
See he created everything on this world for a reason
He made all of us and everything to balance and even like a year theres 4 seasons
Can you feel the feeling after you just got married? Well I cant say because I still havenít found my soul mate
But you know if you image, youíll know what they go through to get to that point please try to imagine and immulate
Can you feel that emotion when you hold you new born child
Well I canít say but Iíll Just imagine and let thoughts of it mingle for im still single
The joys and sorrows of you girl grown and getting married how about that
Well I canít imagine because I was never like love books and never learnt about that
But it all real it not just a fairy tale things like this happens in life
But for me, being a lonely poet heart of Jesus Christ for me to experience this, Iíd have to live twice
I wasnít always like this, I grew up normal perfect to me mom eyes, until Satan came and gave me nothing but strife
I was mommaís son and her first newborn I was beautiful and until Satan said here a mirror as a gift look at yourself you just donít look right, it rip my heart out of my life
I font care how the world see me anymore but only in Jesus eyes do I wonder
But he said im beautiful but if he lied tears would roll out like thunder
Now im not saying I donít get eye contact or smiles from girls im just emotionales and shy
So it seem every time I meet a girl It was also like saying goodbye
No Iím here thinking oh well might s well be a lonely poetic heart of Jesus Christ and looks toward the brighter side
Well thatís it. I have nothing else to say but good bye!!!godbless and look at things on the brighter side everybody-lonely poetic heart part two by Oudawn A.K.A MR.INTUITIVE

If you died today, are you absolutely certain that you would go to heaven? You can be! TRUST JESUS NOW

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