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by oudawn praseutsinh
07/26/09
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I am lost in Myspace,So I cry as my thoughts drifts way.Not by the wind but drifts down by my tears.Silent cries unheard by the ears.Im trying to be manly but emotions of people going to hell and alone, not with God, not being able to make to heaven. i just get comprehend it. So I speak my mind on the pages of a site. That i really dont belong on. Come on its a bar it just doesnt feel right.They dont not Understand me or my words.Problely they think im the most rediculous asian they have ever heard.All im trying to do witness with my blogs.But private comments sometimes make feel like im trapped in mist, lost in fog.Trying to do good like God is very hard.They say "youre a scitzofreniass man youre a retard".If my spoken words are as clear water or as clear as writtens.Then I wouldve never ever,ever been bitten,by peoples words.Im the quiet one in the bar without a drink,in bathroom i dont go to throw up or puke and go to use the sink.Oh yea, here are my thoughts about writing in a site it sucks,i wish i can just be more out spoken and go to people and speak about God.Untill i ,can blogging is what i do.Untill i can pull up confidence and courage to go up and speak with you.No I won't come up to with a pick up line,lust over you physicals, or a flirt. Ill speak to you to make you spiritual then to your heart where it really hurts.First Ill say "God loves you and you seem very smart" which compliments the mind then Ill say tell you"Wow you're beautiful"which compliments the heart."try not to sin but if you must,with comviction repent'With a cleanner mind, heart, body it actually makes you feel more intelligent.Thats where Ill choose to start.Though i do find you beautiful but you know what say about beautiful girls, they arent very nice,there nasty, green hearted,cold as ice.Basicly what their saying is that there mean.Is it true?In a way, I guess beautiful girls needs the most love and God can give that to you.I can give that support and try to understand everything to let you that not all guys are dogs.Is that how you feel?Theie just lost,like everybody else.So dont be like them too,just be yourself..Just do what you do. but what you really need is love from the guy up above.Jesus.So im here to give you a some soul support,good moral believes,just trying to make you mind healthy.You dont need all the money in the world or stuff in that nature to feel wealthy.Bt Jesus can..Im not saying you have to change now but as time pass eventually you rearrange as you are geting old ,and aged.when you have become humbled,wise and bold.Heck you might even pass the Get to Heaven quizz.I know these are kids rhymes but on tv its what gets rappers through the bizz.Though Im not trying to rap or wish I can hit it or like they say tap it.I'm just saying be good,kind ,true and back and forth come on lets just relapse with it.LOL.Mama didnt raise no fool but she also said "its ok if you do, just to see a girl smile you dont belive me go give it a try".So thats the reason ive changed the way Ive spoken to you ,with a little more style.Ok this has turned into a love poem but what I'm trying to say is "you and I plus Jesus we can do it we'll showem".Witnessing is a game, it's hard.But just like Ienstien,for our careers sake ,got to adapt,we just got to get smart.About it.So you want to be with God?Instead of thinking of handsome guys that are well dress,have money and drives a hot rod.Jesus is THE WAY, THE TRUTH, THE LIGHT ,and ONLY THROUGH HIM WILL YOU GET TO HEAVEN,HE iS GOD.I say all these things with caps becuase when we get there, just like kids we will be with him also sittting on his lap.Well that it,i am lost in Myclear, and these are my thoughts continue.......

If you died today, are you absolutely certain that you would go to heaven? You can be! TRUST JESUS NOW

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