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by oudawn praseutsinh
07/26/09
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Come here give a hug and then smile don’t worry you look good in any you where, but listen….
Sensitivity of your skin contact me with your features coming towards me just being bare
captivated with tense firm of craze assorted with obsession, ,and passion wheezing for air but the affection fills me with the life I need, to inhale instead, being pulled in, oppressive lungs due to your arms holding up by your breast. I’LL breathe you
this is what it mean to experience expressively out of breathe,
until there are nothing present in my head,
but if I cant be embrace then all I crave,, is to be buried deep in an early grave.
All I can give you in return is a smile and my sincerity but my deepest thirst is to be desired, wanted and not getting tired,
like being on two cups of coffee, staying up until the dawn, late enough to get you fired. Fired? Nah I’m just playing but it the sense is what I’m trying to express to you, honestly
Honesty, but is that all you want from a man or do you want something supplementary,
buying a Lucy but still wanting the lighter, having the lighter but needing the spark, predators like sharks
you can have more, with me you’ll never be poor.
I’m not saying I’m loaded but these days the only thing girls want is a hitch, just to be ditch, bitches and whores (well you see imp running out of vocabularies lol).
L didn’t want you to see my appalling side but I like to keep it real
That’s just my sex appeal.
For real, but that’s just me being open minded to you to show a sign that I’m never going to take advantage of on you ,never late always making it to the dinner meals.
My Sign? I’m an Aquarius, but what my father said was never to say it just show it, illustrate that cut you got and it ill heal.
For example Don’t just say you can flow, spit currents, streams, be about it let somebody see it
Dinner meal you said?, you can disappear when ever you want, I wont maintain you cornered and I entrap you in a sealed and that’s the only deal.
I’m not playing hard to get at all, l a matter of fact I’m actuality I’m being myself, I’m be easy
Be at ease loosen up, I’m not playing flooded you mind with craps like monopoly
I would never play games, you’ll have my modesty.
But if we ever get in a fight you won’t have to incision your wrist, don’t take the risk if you don’t want to be with this
Just say farewell then just leave me a kiss, so I can recollect it when you are being missed
Young Asian man with a hiss when he prays and wishes
Yes, I’m a Christian, does that shock you, oh you’re not, its ok you don’t have to change
I mean in the future though I’m getting energized about being reunited like you were missing from me ,then we wont be out of reach or out of range
One soul with the same goal to love one another, that’s what you want right? I wonder
now I’m really hissing so I’m think I might initiate my wishing for the lass in front of me, kneels down, with a clue if you get what I mean.
My feelings for you are heart felt unadulterated, and clean
But listen until then they’ll be no strings attached, nothing to pay back, no hidden fees, nothing wired, no contracts deals,
Bu if you don’t want me its ok you can still keep ring anyways and no return fees in all means
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