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Roses for Ding
by oudawn praseutsinh
07/26/09
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I felt the urge to put my feelings in writing
The thought of not being with you is freighting
Ding my dear lil sister
You are on tops of the chart so donít cry tear drops
You used to tell me you hated me,
But way back then we couldn't see,
Peace of mind goes out the door, as the rain pour in
How close we would grow and how strong, if you were here
But deep down we guessed it all along,
That for us there couldn't be another,
And I'm proud to be known as your brother.
When starlight holds no mystery,
When thoughts walks are history,
When you are gone and I'm alone,
When no-one answers the telephone,
Now I truly know you gone
When no-one stops to say hello,
Now I know you are really been gone for a long
No more arguments,now i know its been awhile since we've spoken
But all the things i said to you its was all teasing i was joking
Thats what brothers do we like to fool around
It's 22 years now i know you're all grown
pretty dam long time so now you see me
now you'll that you 26 you'll realized that i shed silent tear drops
Where the stars lies and show
I look up to try to see your figure i hope you look down to see me when i rhyme typing this poem
I dedicate this one to you my writings are blowen
Since we're on a long distance relationship,looooong hope i make it too
You're brothers back in school just trying to give you a sign that I'm just as smart as you
Like brothers like sisters,like two kids mentality always growing
Ding that's when I really miss you so.
I hope you dont think since you're now gone that I'll forget you
BUt here I am standing near your statue that I'm right next to you
So this rose is for you, I hope you like it
Hope it captures you heart bit by bit,a petal for a petal
It's been a while so I was reminincing last night
With the electricity off because i use so much energy so here I am writing with the candles lit
Bye bye my friend my sis,you're truly miss I hope you can see that
I prey for you hope you do the same for me you should try to talk back
Its ok if they think I'm crazy I have shcitzafrenia now so they'll never think anything different
Come on lets chat!
Yea I turned out to be a thug
but im done it's over, now I go to church just to get hugs
I'm known as God's Secret Agent With a Hat as a Mask
Its been that long i really wish you were here to witniss me when i manifested
Into someone I know you and jesus are proud of,down here I'm really handling this
But for now I got to go I'll keep you in my memories and no one can mess with it, it's a gift
And remember all I said above,and again did i mention this rose is for you hope you keep it close
It's a gift but when you where alive life for me was like a gift
I hope to see you soon and thats my only wish
This is you brother Oudawn and I truly have love
So here comes the tears and here comes my last cry
goodbye...:**(
Though when you were alive I didnít show enough
But all brothers ares a little bit rough
Good bye for now I hope I said enough

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