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by Lesley-Anne Evans
06/16/09
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I saw it clearly as I let my eyes linger --
something there
just beyond the obvious

and, like a trout hovering while the fly is cast and
insistently played upon the surface of the pond,
I felt it drawing me

words forming on my silent lips
as God spoke poem into existence
and I, taking the barb-less hook

swallowed deeply.

Lesley-Anne Evans
07/04/2009

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Member Comments
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Anne Linington	19 Jun 2009
Lesley-Anne I am also a fan of your work, so well done on being selected. Love the poem and the imagery - right up my particular street writing-wise. Love, Anne. PS can I recommend Melanie Kerr and Diana Kay's work, both Brits, and I think they have something.
Anne Linington	19 Jun 2009
PS when IS your book coming out?
Patty Wysong	19 Jun 2009
Congratulations! This has been chosen to be highlighted on the Message Boards in the Cheering Section. You can see it by clicking here: FaithWriters Jewel Chest
Karlene Jacobsen	17 Jun 2009
This is really a neat poem. I'm hooked.
harvestgal Ndaguba	17 Jun 2009
Now this was a really good poem. Wow!
Marijo Phelps	16 Jun 2009
Leslie Anne, you have an incredible gift! Each new piece you write captivates me and this one more than others. Thanks for sharing your gifts with us on FW.
Linda Goergen	16 Jun 2009
I really like this analogy, you have effectively brought the essence of that feeling of a poem stirring just under the surface and given it vision! Nice imagery, nice job!

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